CHAPTER NINE // GRANDE BOOM
0130 HOURS // PLANET ALPHA NOVUS FOUR
James sprinted back towards his team, having set the fuse for the explosive he had planted. Precision placement was the key in this particular mission. If the thing detonated but didnt take out both doors, they would have blown their cover for nothing. If, on the other hand, it was too close and was detected, it would be disabled before it could explode. The only real option was to place it exactly right. James knew the exact range of the explosive detection systems in the rebel base, and he knew the exact blast radius of the explosive he had planted. His scans had provided him with a fairly accurate idea of where both doors were that he wanted to get rid of. Therefore, the laser rangefinder fitted to his helmet let him move back to the exactly perfect position to place the explosive.
Down! Get down, Dante, this things not going to discriminate between us and them. Whatever you do, team, do not catch any shrapnel; we want to get back to base in one piece. And nobody goes inside until Ive confirmed the buildings within this rebel base are structurally sound. I do not want a repeat of two years ago. If theres a collapse and were in there, we have less chance to survive than we did then.
The shockwave from the explosion slammed into the four soldiers just before shrapnel peppered their armour and all the ground in a sixty metre radius from the source of detonation. All four of them ducked a massive piece of metal from a Genesis the rebels had stolen, which proceeded to knock down the three trees that had been still standing an instant earlier. From their position, Blue Team could see straight through where the airlock had been and into what was left of the rebel base.
Well, I suppose we dont need to scan, then. To me it looks like the place is on the verge of crumbling, Cat laughed, But then again, all rebel bases do.
Im not going to risk disaster again. Two years ago, Cat, you got your Victoria Cross because you kept coming back in to a half collapsed building to save everyone you could. Hell, I should have died then. Shelby was killed because she came back in to try and get one of Dantes team out of there and the rest of the building collapsed on top of her. The only reason Brendan wasnt killed was because he was one of the ones you saved, and the only reason you and I werent killed was because we were outside when it fell down. I think were lucky. But it should never have happened. I knew the place was structurally unsound, but I led everyone in anyway, against my gut feeling and against Brendans advice and look what happened. Im not going to make the same mistake again, James deftly sidestepped a piece of shrapnel that had been thrown by a secondary blast within the building, And so far the evidence suggests we would be wise to come back later, when the building has either fallen down or stabilised. Is our Cyclone still intact?
Over there, Cat pointed at the overturned LRV, Who wants to flip it?
Everyone stepped forwards, looked at each other, and laughed.
James? Your decision, Dante nodded, Unless someone wants to step backwards?
Nobody moved.
I think itd be quieter to walk it, but itll take hours and we need to be back before anyone else is up. No, Brendan, we cant have a game of zero-gee to decide. We dont have time. Its Dantes turn to do something useful, isnt it?
Er, yeah, Brendan picked up a rock and threw it at the rebel base, Can we get moving already?
Later
Are we there yet?
No, Brendan, Cat sighed.
How bout now?
No!
Now?
Brendan, if you dont shut up right now, Dante reloaded his assault rifle, pointing it at Brendans faceplate, "You can eat lead."
Okay, boys, calm down. I can see the base. The bad news is, Cat sighed, Its sunrise. The others will be well and truly ready to recon the mines.
Isnt that a good thing?
Uh, no, James muttered something his team didnt hear, then shook his head slowly, Theyll be bored, most likely not warming up like they should, and they wont want to wait while they do. Ive got it sorted, though. Im sending a message to the other teams to start getting warmed up to fight these rebels.















Comments
Lolz how young are they, Brendan acts like a little kid but i guess thats just his personality. And now Cat's like a hero instead of just being cool.... i dunno which i like better.
Keep writing!!
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It's been decided that:
A - God does exist,
B - He's on our side, and
C - He wants us to win!
- Starship Troopers Marauder.
As for the timing and placement of the whole explanation thing, it was James justifying to his team why he didn't want to go in unless the rebel base was structurally sound. And of course needlessly reminding everyone what happened.
I like to think Cat's personality is like mine, but I don't know how close to me she really is.
Of course I'll keep writing! My entire family is following my story, my teachers are following my story, and half my friends are following my story. The other half don't really like reading much. There is no way I'll stop until either I run out of muse for this permanently or the story ends. And mark my words, it'll end in a very big way. Which my brother probably won't like.
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"Greater love hath no man than this; that he lay down his life for his friends."
John 15:13
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yep I think thats all that needs to be said.
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It's been decided that:
A - God does exist,
B - He's on our side, and
C - He wants us to win!
- Starship Troopers Marauder.
by the way I finished chapter ten
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"Greater love hath no man than this; that he lay down his life for his friends."
John 15:13
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